typos, adding ashok, and fixing the stylesheet section top-margins

nsfcnsproposal.cls

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-pytex/cls/nsfcnsproposal.cls

nsfcnsproposal.cls

@@ -0,0 +1,285 @@
+\NeedsTeXFormat{LaTeX2e}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : New proposal class. Originally based on the
+%               proposalnsf.cls file downloaded from here:
+% http://www-pord.ucsd.edu/~sgille/how_to/proposal_prep.html
+
+\RequirePackage{color}
+\RequirePackage{calc}
+\RequirePackage{mathpazo}
+\RequirePackage{ulem}
+\ProvidesClass{nsfcnsproposal}[2010/10/22 GWA NSF CNS Proposal Class]
+\DeclareOption*{\PassOptionsToClass{\CurrentOption}{memoir}}
+\ProcessOptions
+\LoadClass[onecolumn,oneside,final]{memoir}
+\RequirePackage{colortbl}
+\RequirePackage{threeparttable}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : Set up simple chapter headings.
+
+\chapterstyle{article}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : Used to be:
+% \setlength{\paperheight}{11in}
+% \setlength{\paperwidth}{8.5in}
+
+\setstocksize{11in}{8.5in}
+\settrimmedsize{11in}{8.5in}{*}
+\settrims{0pt}{0pt}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : Used to be:
+% \setlength{\textwidth}{\paperwidth - 2in}
+% \setlength{\textheight}{\paperheight - 2in}
+
+%\settypeblocksize{9in}{6.5in}{*}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : Used to be:
+% \setlength{\oddsidemargin}{1in}
+% \setlength{\evensidemargin}{1in}
+
+\setlrmarginsandblock{1in}{1in}{*}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : Used to be:
+% \setlength{\topmargin}{1in}
+% \setlength{\headheight}{0pt}
+% \setlength{\headsep}{0pt}
+
+\setulmarginsandblock{1in}{1in}{*}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : Used to be:
+% \setlength{\footskip}{36pt}
+% \setlength{\headheight}{0pt}
+
+\setheadfoot{0.1pt}{36pt}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : Used to be:
+% \setlength{\marginparsep}{0.5cm}
+% \setlength{\marginparwidth}{1.5cm}
+
+\setmarginnotes{0.5cm}{1.5cm}{0.1cm}
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : memoir command to actually apply the layout.
+
+\checkandfixthelayout
+
+% 22 Oct 2010 : GWA : Proposal page style.
+
+\let\@internalcite\cite
+  \def\fullcite{\def\citeauthoryear##1##2##3{##1, ##3}\@internalcite}
+  \def\fullciteA{\def\citeauthoryear##1##2##3{##1}\@internalcite}
+  \def\shortcite{\def\citeauthoryear##1##2##3{##2, ##3}\@internalcite}
+  \def\shortciteA{\def\citeauthoryear##1##2##3{##2}\@internalcite}
+  \def\citeyear{\def\citeauthoryear##1##2##3{##3}\@internalcite}
+
+\newlength{\lefttitle}
+\newlength{\righttitle}
+\setlength{\lefttitle}{0.8\textwidth}
+\setlength{\righttitle}{0.18\textwidth}
+
+\makechapterstyle{proposal}{%
+  \renewcommand{\chapterheadstart}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\printchaptername}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\chapternamenum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\printchapternum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\afterchapternum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\printchaptertitle}[1]{%
+    \vspace{0.5\onelineskip}
+    \Large\scshape\MakeUppercase{##1}
+  } 
+  \renewcommand{\afterchaptertitle}{\vspace{0.5\onelineskip} \hrule}
+} 
+\makechapterstyle{summary}{%
+  \renewcommand{\chapterheadstart}{}
+  \renewcommand{\printchaptername}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\chapternamenum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\printchapternum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\afterchapternum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\printchaptertitle}[1]{
+\noindent\begin{minipage}[t]{\lefttitle}
+\vspace{0pt}
+\raggedright
+\large\scshape{##1}
+\vspace*{0.10in}
+\end{minipage}
+\hfill
+\begin{minipage}[t]{\righttitle}
+\vspace{0pt}
+\raggedleft
+{\small \scshape NSF Proposal\\
+\submissiondate}
+\end{minipage}
+\small
+\theauthors\\
+Type: CI-P; CISE Core Division: IIS; Keywords: databases, smartphones,
+benchmarking
+}
+  \renewcommand{\afterchaptertitle}{\vspace{0.5\onelineskip} \hrule \vspace{0.3\onelineskip}}
+} 
+\makechapterstyle{letter}{%
+  \renewcommand{\chapterheadstart}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\printchaptername}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\chapternamenum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\printchapternum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\afterchapternum}{} 
+  \renewcommand{\printchaptertitle}[1]{}
+  \renewcommand{\afterchaptertitle}{}
+} 
+\definecolor{shadecolor}{gray}{0.9}
+\newcommand{\proposalsec}[1]{%
+  \large\bfseries\raggedright #1
+}
+\setsecheadstyle{\proposalsec}
+\renewcommand{\thesection}{\arabic{section}}
+\chapterstyle{proposal}
+
+% 26 Oct 2010 : GWA : Section styles.
+\setsecnumformat{\csname the#1\endcsname\space---\space}
+\setbeforesecskip{-1.0ex plus -0.5ex minus -0.2ex}
+\setaftersecskip{1.0ex plus 0.2ex minus 0.1ex}
+
+% 26 Oct 2010 : GWA : Subsection styles.
+\setcounter{secnumdepth}{2}
+\setsubsecheadstyle{\bfseries\raggedright}
+\setbeforesubsecskip{1ex plus -0.2ex minus -0.2ex}
+\setaftersubsecskip{0.3ex plus -0.2ex minus -0.2ex}
+\setbeforesubsubsecskip{-1.0ex plus -0.2ex minus -0.2ex}
+\setaftersubsubsecskip{-0.3ex plus -0.2ex minus -0.2ex}
+
+\newcounter{flushenumbfenum}
+\newenvironment{flushenumbf}{
+  \begin{list}{\textbf{\arabic{flushenumbfenum}.}}
+    {\setlength{\leftmargin}{0pt}}%
+     \setlength{\labelwidth}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\itemindent}{0.5em}
+     \setlength{\labelsep}{0.5em}
+     \usecounter{flushenumbfenum}}
+  {\end{list}} 
+
+% 22 Nov 2010 : GWA : Research questions environment. Produces a running list
+%               (i.e., counters do not reset) prefaced by "Q1", "Q2", etc.
+
+\newcounter{researchquestionenum}
+\newcounter{researchquestionenumtmp}
+\newenvironment{researchquestions}{
+  \savetrivseps
+  \zerotrivseps
+  \vspace{0.5em}
+  \begin{framed}
+  \vspace*{-0.5em}
+  \begin{list}{\textbf{Q\arabic{researchquestionenum}.}}
+    {\setlength{\leftmargin}{2em}}%
+     \setlength{\labelwidth}{4em}
+     \setlength{\itemindent}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\labelsep}{0.5em}
+     \setlength{\topsep}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\partopsep}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\parskip}{0pt}
+     \usecounter{researchquestionenum}
+     \setcounter{researchquestionenum}{\value{researchquestionenumtmp}}}
+  {\end{list}
+  \end{framed}
+  \setcounter{researchquestionenumtmp}{\value{researchquestionenum}}
+  \restoretrivseps}
+
+\newcounter{researchtaskenum}
+\newenvironment{researchtasks}{
+  \begin{list}{\textbf{R\arabic{researchtaskenum}.}}
+    {\setlength{\leftmargin}{2em}}%
+     \setlength{\labelwidth}{4em}
+     \setlength{\itemindent}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\labelsep}{0.5em}
+     \usecounter{researchtaskenum}}
+  {\end{list}}
+
+\newcounter{researchmethodsenum}
+\newenvironment{researchmethods}{
+  \begin{list}{\alph{researchmethodsenum}.}
+    {\setlength{\leftmargin}{0pt}}%
+     \setlength{\labelwidth}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\itemindent}{0.5em}
+     \setlength{\labelsep}{0.5em}
+     \usecounter{researchmethodsenum}}
+  {\end{list}}
+
+\newcounter{broaderimpactenum}
+\newcounter{broaderimpactenumtmp}
+\newenvironment{broaderimpacts}{
+  \savetrivseps
+  \zerotrivseps
+  \vspace{0.2em}
+  \begin{framed}
+  \vspace*{-0.5em}
+  \begin{list}{\textbf{B\arabic{broaderimpactenum}.}}
+    {\setlength{\leftmargin}{2em}}%
+     \setlength{\labelwidth}{4em}
+     \setlength{\itemindent}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\labelsep}{0.5em}
+     \setlength{\topsep}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\partopsep}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\parskip}{0pt}
+     \usecounter{broaderimpactenum}
+     \setcounter{broaderimpactenum}{\value{broaderimpactenumtmp}}}
+  {\end{list}
+  \end{framed}
+  \setcounter{broaderimpactenumtmp}{\value{broaderimpactenum}}
+  \restoretrivseps}
+
+\newcounter{timeenumcounter}
+\newenvironment{timeenum}{
+  \savetrivseps
+  \zerotrivseps
+  \begin{list}{\textbf{t = \arabic{timeenumcounter}}}
+    {\setlength{\leftmargin}{3em}}%
+     \setlength{\labelwidth}{3em}
+     \setlength{\itemindent}{0pt}
+     \setlength{\labelsep}{1em}
+     \usecounter{timeenumcounter}
+     \setcounter{timeenumcounter}{-1}}
+  {\end{list}
+  \restoretrivseps}
+
+\newenvironment{conclusion}{
+  \savetrivseps
+  \zerotrivseps
+  \vspace{0.2em}
+  \begin{framed}
+  \vspace*{-0.5em}}
+  {\end{framed}
+  \restoretrivseps}
+
+\newenvironment{tightcenter}{
+  \savetrivseps
+  \zerotrivseps
+  \begin{center}}
+  {\end{center}
+  \restoretrivseps}
+
+\newenvironment{tightcentertitle}{
+  \savetrivseps
+  \zerotrivseps
+  \vspace*{0.1in}
+  \begin{center}}
+  {\end{center}
+  \vspace*{0.1in}
+  \restoretrivseps}
+
+\tightlists
+\firmlists
+\renewcommand{\bibname}{References}
+\renewcommand{\thetable}{\arabic{table}}
+\newenvironment{indentpar}[1]{
+  \begin{list}{}%
+           {\setlength{\leftmargin}{#1}}%
+            \setlength{\itemindent}{0em}
+            \setlength{\parskip}{0pt}
+            \setlength{\parsep}{0pt}
+            \setlength{\labelsep}{0em}}
+  {\end{list}}
+
+% 06 Dec 2010 : GWA : Figure and captioning commands.
+\renewcommand{\thefigure}{\arabic{figure}}
+\captiondelim{ --- }
+\captionnamefont{\small\bfseries}
+\captiontitlefont{\small}
+\nonzeroparskip
+\setlength{\parindent}{0pt}

sections/1-1-metrics.tex

@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ We noted above that a large proportion of \texttt{SELECT} queries were exact loo
     \caption{}
     \label{fig:app:rowcount}
   \end{subfigure}%
-  \caption{Per-App Summary Statistics for Android SQLite Queries. Distributions of (a) inter-query arrival times, (b) query runtimes, and (c) rows returned per query.}
+  \caption{\textbf{Per-App Summary Statistics for Android SQLite Queries. Distributions of (a) inter-query arrival times, (b) query runtimes, and (c) rows returned per query.}}
   \label{fig:app}
 \end{figure*}
 
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ notable for regularly issuing queries that return on the order of 100 rows.
     \includegraphics[width=\textwidth]{graphs/facebook-minified.pdf}
     \caption{}
   \end{subfigure}%
-\caption{Variations in bursty data access patterns~\cite{ramamurthy2015pocketdata} for WhatsApp (a) and Facebook (b).}
+\caption{\textbf{Variations in bursty data access patterns~\cite{ramamurthy2015pocketdata} for WhatsApp (a) and Facebook (b).}}
 \label{fig:burstiness}
 \end{figure*}
 

sections/1-description.tex

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ database responsiveness, and database performance on smartphones and tablets.
 \item Saarland University's Janiform Document project explores interactive 
 manuscripts that include embedded, query-able research data and visualizations.
 \item Oracle, SAP Labs, Facebook, LMDB, SQLite, and MongoDB are all actively
-engaged in research and development of embedded database software.
+engaged in research on and development of embedded database software.
 \item The Presto group at Ohio State is exploring responsiveness issues
 in Android caused by data-flow limitations.
 \item The DAS Lab at Harvard's work on adaptive data management considers 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ Data access patterns vary wildly by user, time of day, mix of installed apps,
 network accessibility, and many other factors.  
 %
 Platform properties such as RAM, persistent storage, CPU performance, and network
-bandwidth vary wildly, sometimes by multiple orders of magnitude.
+bandwidth also exhibit extreme variations, sometimes by multiple orders of magnitude.
 %
 Resource availability can also vary; Some users keep their phones constantly 
 charged, while others go multiple days without charging.

sections/2-research.tex

@@ -106,6 +106,3 @@ Although the threat of insider attacks on mobile devices is minimal, the specifi
 The approach is showing promise for summarizing query logs from a corporate (banking) setting.
 Having query logs from other settings like \PocketData{} would show that the approach can be generalized and may have applications beyond Insider Threat detection (for example to the design of index selection tools).
 If successful, these efforts could also contribute back to the \PocketData{} project, as a tool for quickly summarizing and clustering query logs would help to build out the visualization and benchmark design components of the proposed infrastructure.
-
-\subsection{Enabled Research for the Broader Community}
-\todo{Do we want this section here?}

sections/3-community.tex

@@ -37,10 +37,10 @@ our current efforts toward building a community and the community's support for
     Raghunath Nambiar & \emph{Cisco} & Databases & Performance measurement \\
     Reza Taheri & \emph{VMWare}      & Databases & Performance measurement \\
     Jens Dittrich & \emph{Saarland University}&  Databases/Mobile Systems & Small-data analytics \\
-    Sharad Agarwal & \emph{Microsoft}& Mobile Systems/Sensing & Mobile systems privacy \\ \hline
+    Sharad Agarwal & \emph{Microsoft Research}& Mobile Systems/Sensing & Mobile systems privacy \\ \hline
    \end{tabular}
 \end{center}
-\caption{Community Interest in }
+\caption{\textbf{Existing Community Interest in} \PocketData{}}
 \label{tab:enabled}
 \end{figure}