Outline updated

outline_for_rest_of_the_paper.txt

@@ -1,14 +1,28 @@
+1. Introduction
+
+- We are currently too focused on what we did.
+- We should focus on motivation more.
+
+- First two paragraphs - what we do on this paper
+- The rest of the introduction
+	- why this is needed
+	- what is novel
+- Last paragraph: summary of contributions
+
 2. System Outline
 This talks about moving parts of the system. Description of each phase constitutes of their purpose, inputs and outputs.
 
-[Gourab: I agree with Oliver's point of a sifnificant overlap between this section and S3. I think after we freeze the outline, we should move out the detailed description of each phase from sub-sections of S2 to S3. Is it okay to have a leaner S2?]
+[Gourab: I agree with Oliver's point of a significant overlap between this section and S3. I think after we freeze the outline, we should move out the detailed description of each 
+phase from sub-sections of S2 to S3. Is it okay to have a leaner S2?]
+
+[Gokhan: Let's merge section 2 and 3. We start with current section 2; meaning, we will give a 1-2 paragraph design and moving parts introduction. We will follow with 1 sentence description of the phases within \tinysection{} styling. Then we are going to introduce every phase with every detail.
 
 2.1 Clustering Phase
 2.2 Session Identification phase
 2.3 Session parameter detection phase
 
 
-3. Detailed Design
+3. Detailed Design 
 This dives deep into each phase. We talk about the techniques we have used - what has already been done before and what's new. We illustrate key techniques in details and talk about why these were choosen
 
 3.1 Clustering
@@ -16,6 +30,8 @@ This dives deep into each phase. We talk about the techniques we have used - wha
 3.3 Pattern Matching
 3.4 Resource Utilization
 
+[Gokhan: Merge this section completely as described in the previous comment.]
+
 
 4. Experiments